Oh my god arch, this bridge between this ‘you’ you address and the mess of the pomegranate, the malum granatum- and the logs from different times in the night and the morning after in its early hours. Like you keep coming back to their memories and the red stains altogther. You know you’re being consumed….My god- fantastic. Brilliant. Simply brilliant. I’m in awe- 🫂🩷
Oh mhm hi! I want to be friends in a totally non creepy way because what is this architecture of a lyrical masterpiece? For someone craving a pomegranate tattoo since ages, youre pushing me :) great work girl! 💌
oh my god shristi “architecture of a lyrical masterpiece” is genuinely the sweetest thing i’ve heard. and wait a pomegranate tattoo too? okay we’re already friends now idc 🤍
pls don’t push me into becoming an erotica author 😭 i don't want to be one in any universe. i’m just out here writing my silly little fruit metaphors and somehow you’re finding smut in them, oh rishiiii.
Oh my god arch, this bridge between this ‘you’ you address and the mess of the pomegranate, the malum granatum- and the logs from different times in the night and the morning after in its early hours. Like you keep coming back to their memories and the red stains altogther. You know you’re being consumed….My god- fantastic. Brilliant. Simply brilliant. I’m in awe- 🫂🩷
oh my god stoppp 😭
the way you caught the stains/memory loop thing so perfectly??? i feel so seen.
“being consumed” was exactly the feeling i was trying to drag out of it. thank you sm for reading me this carefully, bbg <<3
Oh mhm hi! I want to be friends in a totally non creepy way because what is this architecture of a lyrical masterpiece? For someone craving a pomegranate tattoo since ages, youre pushing me :) great work girl! 💌
oh my god shristi “architecture of a lyrical masterpiece” is genuinely the sweetest thing i’ve heard. and wait a pomegranate tattoo too? okay we’re already friends now idc 🤍
You really aren't a mediocre poet. The infusion between pleasure, intimacy, sex and the fruit. Kind of poetic smut, really loved it.
I think you'll become the greatest one first Arch.
“poetic smut” actually made me laugh so hard 😭😭 thank you sm though, genuinely.
the way you read all the little details means a lot to me, rish <3
Even i didn't dream of reading poetic smut 😂
You should write smut, ig it would really be reaaalllly achingly beautiful ✌🏻
pls don’t push me into becoming an erotica author 😭 i don't want to be one in any universe. i’m just out here writing my silly little fruit metaphors and somehow you’re finding smut in them, oh rishiiii.
To be honest I've read it again, and it still gave me the same feeling that I remember when I saw the video song of Animals by Maroon 5.
I think if you were spectative reader you would have got the same feeling ig.
But I'm sorry it's really intimate and I'm really Sorryyy 🤧 Arch!
okay now the Maroon 5 comparison is killing me 😭😭 and no no, don’t apologize pls. i get what you mean, rishii <3
i’ll try to tone the intensity down in my next writings but knowing me, i can’t promise anything oh god.
I'm evaluating it in the wrong way, don't change yourself.
Don't ever change yourself for someone's fuck's sake. I wouldn't too ;)